Thursday 10 March 2011

Feedback from the Class

Editing: Continuous, pace was the same throughout, could vary a bit. No different transitions, all using cuts. Add different shot types and transitions.

Camerawork: Good range of different shots, suitable for the genre. Steady camera, helps promote mystery by not showing the girl's face. Well done :3

Titles: Nice use of titles, creative way of using them, the typewriter effect is really good. unclear of what the name of the film is.

Sound: Music was appropriate, went well with what was going on. Fitted in well with the thriller conventions. Voice-over was good, sounded realistic.

Mise-En-Scene: Good use of significant props, realistic blood was good. Good use of the book. Locations could be more connected.

Thriller conventions: Narrative centres around crimes, the antagonist is the protagonist (don't know if its a convention but I like it), micro elements combine to create suspense, the audience is placed in the voyeristic place. We can see the girl is the murderer but the characters cannot.

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