Thursday 10 March 2011

Action Plan

After having other students review our rough cut film, we have created a list of things that would improve our work for the deadline next week.


  • Editing: A slight differentiation of transitions, pace of editing and to use fewer cuts - we shall improve this by adding different effects between film clips, probably subtle and not too overbearing as to not distract or take away from our current work. However we do disagree that the pace of editing is not varied, within the montage the pace is much faster for example compared to the phone call. 
  • Camerawork feedback was positive.
  • Titles: The title of the film is unclear as it is placed in the middle and not at the end - We shall move the title to the end of the work. 
  • Sound feedback was also positive. 
  • Mise-en-scene: Locations of filming are a little isolated from each other - We cannot do anything about this as we do not have the time to re-film nor are there many places in Cambridge that we can film using very realistic fake blood or violent weapons.    

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